Is Breast Always Best???
-What did you like about it?
a) I liked the fact that she was an experienced mother as opposed to someone inexperienced in motherhood. Her real life examples about her some were extremely effective and proved to anyone reading how confident she is in formula milk.
-How does it fit the WP#1 assignment prompt?
b) This proposal fits with WP#1 because she had a clear audience she was addressing and she uses personal experiences.
-If you were going to revise this to submit for wp#1, what would you change? why?
c) If I were going to revise this paper I would include more information on the formula's available to use and what the positives of using them would be.
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Ty I agree with you that she did a good job on her topic. I too believe she did all the requirements for WP#1. Since I am a breast feeding mother I was lucky enough to be able to do it with success with both my children. I would like to know more on formula as well since my sister in law is going to be having a baby soon and is going to use formula. That way I could give her some good advice.
ReplyDeleteI like how you answered C, i really didn't think about it that way, but it would have been a good idea for her to include more of those types of examples. I like the girls comment above me, its good to be open in this kind of class. Also the only reason i reply to your posts is because i had a mean teacher in 7th grade biology who had the same last name, just thought i'd let you know ;)
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